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Monochrome Dream eater by Zanerus Monochrome Dream eater by Zanerus
With eyes sealed tight,
The night will slip on by,
But my oh my do I hear tears?

Knock three times,
On the window sill,
Missy what is your misery?

With a kiss,
I will take away,
All of your nightmares.

I ask nothing,
Just a little peck,
And all your honesty.

Watch all the nightmares fade,
With a drain of color from the sky,
As the full moon begins to rise.

And when it eclipses,
More nightmares shall sing,
And I'll be here to take them away.

Til the moon drops,
I'll take away all the darkness,
And the light of moon as well.

I'll ask for nothing,
Because you gave it all to me,
All of your reality now belong to me.

Don't be making,
That dark face at me,
Enjoy your stay in these Monochrome days.
****

Google Monochrome Dream Eater Baku for the art.

A practice poem on character point of view and word choice based on Monochrome Dream Eater Baku. A Baku is a Japanese dream eating spirit.

English version found here:www.youtube.com/watch?v=KZ02eP…

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AllensCurse44 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
awesome!! 
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MysteryWind99 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013
Oh man I just keep coming to this picture and staring at it *o*
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MysteryWind99 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013
Oh my I love this your the best person ever!
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Vampirik-Gackt-sama Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
   Cool! w00t!
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Onikage108 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013
lovely.
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CursedSeraphim Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
amazing ^.^
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vellusz Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I like the art. Poem, not so much, too much telling and not enough showing.
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Zanerus Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm admittingly out of practice on character POV poems, hence the practice.
Thank you regardless
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vellusz Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You should check out the works of *beeinthebottle, he's quite instructive when it comes to writing poems. =)
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Gororo Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Great art, fine poem.

He reminds me of Soul (Eater) Evans from the manga/anime Soul Eater in name, looks and style :D
Very nice!
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