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Monochrome Dream eater by Zanerus Monochrome Dream eater by Zanerus
With eyes sealed tight,
The night will slip on by,
But my oh my do I hear tears?

Knock three times,
On the window sill,
Missy what is your misery?

With a kiss,
I will take away,
All of your nightmares.

I ask nothing,
Just a little peck,
And all your honesty.

Watch all the nightmares fade,
With a drain of color from the sky,
As the full moon begins to rise.

And when it eclipses,
More nightmares shall sing,
And I'll be here to take them away.

Til the moon drops,
I'll take away all the darkness,
And the light of moon as well.

I'll ask for nothing,
Because you gave it all to me,
All of your reality now belong to me.

Don't be making,
That dark face at me,
Enjoy your stay in these Monochrome days.
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Google Monochrome Dream Eater Baku for the art.

A practice poem on character point of view and word choice based on Monochrome Dream Eater Baku. A Baku is a Japanese dream eating spirit.

English version found here:www.youtube.com/watch?v=KZ02eP…

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AllensCurse44 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
awesome!! 
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MysteryWind99 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013
Oh man I just keep coming to this picture and staring at it *o*
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MysteryWind99 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013
Oh my I love this your the best person ever!
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Vampirik-Gackt-sama Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
   Cool! w00t!
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Onikage108 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013
lovely.
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CursedSeraphim Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
amazing ^.^
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vellusz Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I like the art. Poem, not so much, too much telling and not enough showing.
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Zanerus Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm admittingly out of practice on character POV poems, hence the practice.
Thank you regardless
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vellusz Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You should check out the works of *beeinthebottle, he's quite instructive when it comes to writing poems. =)
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Gororo Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Great art, fine poem.

He reminds me of Soul (Eater) Evans from the manga/anime Soul Eater in name, looks and style :D
Very nice!
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Zanerus Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
The art I found through google, the poem is my own work.

In art style I can see it, character , not so much.
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lalocaven Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Student General Artist
FREAKING AWESOME AS FAAAAAACK!!!! 
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Mi-Rin Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So cool!~
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Tamdrogynous Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013
the poem's great and all, but this isn't your art. please change the image, because it's risrespectful to the artist.
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Zanerus Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I wish to add that I have tried to change the image multiple times and keeps requiring a preview picture. I can't find the artist for this piece but if they request it be taken down or DA admins do, I shall do so.
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Tamdrogynous Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013
the artist most likely doesn't speak english, you know. i understand your frustration, but it's hugely unfair to the actual artist of that image to continue using it.
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Zanerus Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
he image is a preview picture and is listed as such in the author's comments at the bottom. and yea I was thinking of just removing the image since people don't seem to realize this. DA glitched, not my fault.
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Tamdrogynous Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013
*disrespectful wow
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Laxus98 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That is just amazing buddy
i really liked this pice :nod:
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Zanerus Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you
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Laxus98 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
most welcome :) 
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Nihilumsss Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This was the first song from vocaloids I listened to^^
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ThunderSpade Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013
Nice
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Zanerus Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you
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